The Eye of a Anchor

[bill jolley]

one more from the York peninsula

[sejac]

Interesting shot Bill. I like the textured background, and the texture of the anchor itself.

However, I feel the anchor is too tightly squeezed into the frame. That is, the crop is too tight. It needs more room at the edges - 'room the breathe' is an expression I seem to often use.

I would experiment with warming up the colors a bit too.

Others will tell me I'm wrong, but that's what I see. Hope this helps.

[bill jolley]

thanks for your input
the background is not original so i can make more room
the anchor itself has had so much paint put on it that it has taken a lot of the texture away from it
will experiment
bill