Sandy, #1 looks potentially a good shot to me. F4.5 will give a narrow DOF, but you have focused well on the subject. Nice light, colors too. But why cut off bits of the flower? Why is it pushed over to the far left of the frame? And it would be interesting to see more of the jar in the composition.
#2 looks like you used a flash. Personally, I don't like those close-up flash shots. Harsh light and shadows.
#2 looks like you used a flash. Personally, I don't like those close-up flash shots. Harsh light and shadows.
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