Cement train

[seaslug]

Sony A57 18 - 135 @ 90mm F14 1/100 ISO 160

[seaslug]

I quite like this photo.

This train carries cement powder from Goliath Portland limestone quarry at Railton (about 25 kms from Devonport) to the silos on the wharf. It's then loaded onto one of two ships for transport to either Melbourne or Sydney.

I caught it just at the right spot to illustrate the carriage bins and the silos in the distance.

[beeb]

Effective composition as is, but I still couldn't help but notice the leaning horizon straight away - it just makes the image feel a bit off-kilter to me.

Also the sliver of roof poking into the top left of frame, IMO it either needs more included to make it a framing feature, or to be cropped out to remove it as a distraction.

A few minor changes and a nice image would become a strong image IMO.