[loose cannon]

Love what you have achieved here tim.

Maybe some of the whites could come up a bit but I'm really being picky.

[timmo]

I'm really being picky...shame on you
thanks Mick...I want to get back to more writing and having images helps stir the brain cells
I agree with you and Alan...I will make adjustment to some of the white areas,
thanks for the time to comment
cheers
tim

[timmo]

thanks again everyone
cheers
tim

[jenne]

You should listen more to your right side brain explosions, this is the second time (in my spotty memory) you have shown us something delightful and exquisite. Love your poem and your image and the lovely way you have presented your whole package. Love Alan's links too, haiku done well is precious. Let that brain loose tim .

[timmo]

thanks so much Jenne for your thoughtful response. I appreciate it very much
cheers
tim